That was a nice haiku but the middle line has one too many syllables. I knew that it was a haiku, but in the future you might want to add an author's note. Otherwise, good job.
I liked that haiku, but I think the middle line was eight syllables instead of seven.
That was a nice haiku but the middle line has one too many syllables. I knew that it was a haiku, but in the future you might want to add an author's note. Otherwise, good job.
ReplyDeleteI liked that haiku, but I think the middle line was eight syllables instead of seven.
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