Authors Note: The day I wrote this I was in my classroom and it was VERY rainy day so I decided to write this.
I sit inside my boring, 24 year oldhouse. I look out the creaky window and see that the rain started to pour. Also I saw kids run freely stepping in puddles, splashing in the water. So I decided to join them. I sprinted down my hallway running into things I did not pick up. I grabbed my rain boots and rain coat and fled out of my house. When I got outside I saw that my friend Timmy was there. So I joined him in stepping in the puddles. We laughed and joked, and splashed, and ran. It was so much fun I couldn't beleive that one of the most boring days in my life, actually ended up being my most fun day in my life.
P.S. THIS IS NOT A TRUE STORY!!!!!
That was a good short story. I thought you were really descriptive.
ReplyDeleteNice story Jessie. I liked how descriptive you were when you said how you tripped over things you didn't bother to pick up because it gave me a clearer picture of what the home was like. A suggestion would be to mention that it's not a true story in your author's note, not just randomly at the end. Other than that, it was a very interesting, fun-to-read short story.
ReplyDeleteI liked your story. It was descriptive, but I wish you could have written more in the story because it had a very good start.
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