Sophie had a passion for fashion,
Sophie loved rings with things,
Sophie wore shirts with skirts,
Sophie had a sweater for cold weather,
Sophie wore hats with flats,
Sophie hated the look of unclean jeans,
Sophie loved crystals from Bristol, England,
As you can see Sophie's a fashion queen,
But guess what Sophie's only a teen.
I enjoyed reading your poem because of the rhyming. I would have changed the line "She loved rings with things" because "things" isn't very specific. An example would be: "She wore a ring with bling" Overall I really like your poem!! Nice Job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you rhymed and I think it flowed really well. I agree with Isabel about the line about rings and things.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you rhymed through out your poem. You stayed on topic with all of the fashion. Maybe you could have started some of the phrases with a different word other than "Sophie." Otherwise, awesome job!
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